Nighttime Cup

The full moon escalates the fears of the night Leaving shadows from the tall frightening trees Branches reaching out to the tombstones of fright Fear envelopes by what people sure believes The bats scare, ravens bring fear, and moon heightens Everything in sight the moon laughs and brightens As the night cools things down, the moon warms it up Darkness never fully wins the nighttime cup
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 3:41 PM
I enjoyed your symbolism of a nighttime cup in this one, Russell.
Grisetti Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 8:21 AM
A scary Halloween rispetto. What will you write about next week? You should publish a book of all your Halloween poems.
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 8:06 AM
The night's darkness is a scary thing..Just a small amount of light offers some comfort..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my Gogyohka...I hope that your day is good..Sara
Song Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 3:32 AM
Such a catchy flow full of the Autumn night's allure...enjoyed this one, Russ. :) gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 11:45 PM
the imagery really drew me into the piece through tone, metaphor and especially the strong atmosphere coming through the lines. Such a wonderful, smooth piece, russell... impressed my friend!,,:) huggs
Long Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 7:00 PM
love the picture your words paint.. I can see you really love this time of year. Wonderfully scribed so full of life.. cory
Lamoureux Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 6:34 PM
No need competing with the night, it will always win in the end. At least until the morning light sends the Demons and Vampires packing. Thanks for the veining Chill, if I can't sleep I will blame it on you
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