Nightscape

The frantic moon --
After waking from a nightmare
The cold of my room
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 11:22 AM
I like how this one kind of rhymed and the imagery of it. Very nice, JIm. Happy thanksgiving.
Delacroix Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 11:04 PM
Excellent haiku! I have been learning how to really write haikus from an expert, and you know how. Well done! And thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
Wilson Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Thanks, Caroline, for taking the time to post such a supportive comment. Best wishes, Jim
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November 13, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Jim... a very epic,, haiku... can feel the coldnes.....Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA
Wilson Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Linda, thanks for your kind words. You also have a poetry-productive day. Jim
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