Night's Promise, Morning's Truth

How much did I drink last night?
Morning comes and takes a bite
out of my soul with fangs of light,
a halo of pain blurs my sight.

How long did we dance last night?
The champagne made my head feel light.
Within your arms my heart took flight.
Everything was oh, so right!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Malekutu Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 2:54 PM
GREAT
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 6:06 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Raven Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Hi Gary, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
Gentry Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
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