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Nightmares

Childhood nightmares. Relentlessly pounding me. Need to stay awake. Eventually. Sleep always overcomes me. What drug to try now?

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Silent One

Date: 11/1/2017 1:36:00 PM

A haiku is about nature and 3 lines with a syllable count of 7 5 7 You could call this a free verse. That can be anything

Aaron Wheeler
Date: 11/1/2017 2:35:00 PM

Many thanks. I will do that in the future. :)

Silent One

Date: 11/1/2017 11:47:00 AM

Very deep write Aaron, but this is not a haiku.. Trauma form childhood sadly stays with us.. I hope you find your peace..

Aaron Wheeler
Date: 11/1/2017 1:09:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. What would this be considered?

Pailey Gordon

Date: 10/31/2017 2:10:00 PM

Wow... This is so deep. Absolutely stunning, well written

Aaron Wheeler
Date: 10/31/2017 3:00:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words Pailey.