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Nightmares

Darkness, erases light enticing the wicked. While demons create horrific nightmares. Nightmares, manifest fright haunting my subconscious. incarcerating, my soul in darkness. 5/25/2017

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Date: 6/4/2017 9:06:00 AM
An excellent double alternate Cinquain, Jeremy. Darkness and nightmares provide good food for dark inspiration. Congrats on a truly fine win. Regards // paul
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/4/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Paul! I appreciate the comment and the view :)
Date: 5/31/2017 11:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jeremy
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/31/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Joseph :)
Date: 5/31/2017 1:58:00 AM
Deep, dark and well written Jeremy.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/31/2017 2:01:00 AM
James, thank you for your comment and view :)
Date: 5/31/2017 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations with your place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that exemplifies what the form is about. Very nice poem, very well done. Cheers,
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/31/2017 1:17:00 AM
Thank you, very much John :) I'm very happy you placed me!!
Date: 5/31/2017 1:04:00 AM
This is a wicked and great write, Jeremy! Well done!
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White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 6:56:00 AM
Sometimes our first attempts are our best unless it's sex of course! /|\
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/31/2017 1:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot :) I'm glad my first try placed!!
Date: 5/26/2017 1:25:00 AM
Wow Jeremy, you created a terrific poem! If this is for the contest? Good luck :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/26/2017 1:38:00 AM
Thanks Darren :) Yes, it is for the contest.

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