Jeremy Smith Poet Cinquain

Nightmares

Darkness,
erases light
enticing the wicked.
While demons create horrific
nightmares.

Nightmares,
manifest fright
haunting my subconscious. 
incarcerating, my soul in
darkness.

5/25/2017

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Paul Callus June 4, 2017 at 9:06 AM An excellent double alternate Cinquain, Jeremy. Darkness and nightmares provide good food for dark inspiration. Congrats on a truly fine win. Regards // paul Jeremy Smith June 4, 2017 at 9:27 AM Thank you, Paul! I appreciate the comment and the view :)

Joseph May May 31, 2017 at 11:58 AM Congrats on your win Jeremy Jeremy Smith May 31, 2017 at 12:01 PM Thanks a lot, Joseph :)

James Inman May 31, 2017 at 1:58 AM Deep, dark and well written Jeremy. Jeremy Smith May 31, 2017 at 2:01 AM James, thank you for your comment and view :)

John Anderson May 31, 2017 at 1:14 AM Congratulations with your place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that exemplifies what the form is about. Very nice poem, very well done. Cheers, Jeremy Smith May 31, 2017 at 1:17 AM Thank you, very much John :) I'm very happy you placed me!!

White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 1:04 AM This is a wicked and great write, Jeremy! Well done! White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 6:56 AM Sometimes our first attempts are our best unless it's sex of course! /|\ Jeremy Smith May 31, 2017 at 1:11 AM Thanks a lot :) I'm glad my first try placed!!

Darren White May 26, 2017 at 1:25 AM Wow Jeremy, you created a terrific poem! If this is for the contest? Good luck :) Jeremy Smith May 26, 2017 at 1:38 AM Thanks Darren :) Yes, it is for the contest.