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Nightmares

Dreamers wake and feel relief: Horror’s in the head; Farts and snores disturb my sleep, When she’s in my bed. * * Pure fiction For Andrea’s 7/5 Trochee contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/3/2015 9:56:00 PM
Jack, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 11:47:00 AM
Love the humour, Jack! Anyway, could easily have been a pet dog. Congrats on your lovely win. // paul
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Date: 5/2/2015 9:02:00 AM
!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara
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Date: 5/2/2015 6:45:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2015 3:04:00 AM
LOL, congrats Jack.
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:44:00 AM
JACK:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:43:00 AM
hahaha. I should have known this was you, Jack. You are a GAS!!! Congrats in my contest. (you sure it's not based on your nasty Ex?)
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Date: 4/21/2015 6:31:00 PM
He he he . Love the humor. love phyl
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Date: 4/13/2015 3:18:00 PM
Particularly nasty aspects to this visitation Jack, I don't envy you at all..'
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:06:00 AM
Happy Easter mate.
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:32:00 PM
Sleeping single in a double bed, nough said. :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:41:00 PM
lol jack brought a smile thank you pal
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Date: 3/29/2015 1:46:00 PM
Good that it is pure fiction..Got a chuckle..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara(Type the characters you see in the box is 666)..
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Date: 3/29/2015 12:34:00 PM
LOL...I'm glad this is a work of fiction! If I was your wife, I wouldn't be too happy with you after reading this...very cute, Jack...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:55:00 AM
Jack, this is a good one, lol, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, why God . . .
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Date: 3/29/2015 8:53:00 AM
It's not the snores that disturb your sleep. Nice little ditty.
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Date: 3/29/2015 7:49:00 AM
ha ha ha - love the humour here:-) Hugs jan xx Good luck in the contest:-) xx
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