Nightmares

Dreamers wake and feel relief:
Horror’s in the head;
Farts and snores disturb my sleep,
When she’s in my bed. *

* Pure fiction

For Andrea’s 7/5 Trochee contest

sleeprhyme

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Skat A

May 3, 2015 at 9:56 PM

Jack, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus

May 2, 2015 at 11:47 AM

Love the humour, Jack! Anyway, could easily have been a pet dog. Congrats on your lovely win. // paul

Sara Kendrick

May 2, 2015 at 9:02 AM

!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

Jan Allison

May 2, 2015 at 6:45 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

May 2, 2015 at 3:04 AM

LOL, congrats Jack.

Skat A

May 2, 2015 at 12:44 AM

JACK:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

May 2, 2015 at 12:43 AM

hahaha. I should have known this was you, Jack. You are a GAS!!! Congrats in my contest. (you sure it's not based on your nasty Ex?)

Phyllis Babcock

April 21, 2015 at 6:31 PM

He he he . Love the humor. love phyl

Joe Maverick

April 13, 2015 at 3:18 PM

Particularly nasty aspects to this visitation Jack, I don't envy you at all..'

Scott Thirtyseven

April 4, 2015 at 9:06 AM

Happy Easter mate.

Robert Johnson

April 1, 2015 at 8:32 PM

Sleeping single in a double bed, nough said. :)

Liam Mcdaid

March 30, 2015 at 12:41 PM

lol jack brought a smile thank you pal

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2015 at 1:46 PM

Good that it is pure fiction..Got a chuckle..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara(Type the characters you see in the box is 666)..