Nightmares

Dreamers wake and feel relief:
Horror’s in the head;
Farts and snores disturb my sleep,
When she’s in my bed. *

* Pure fiction

For Andrea’s 7/5 Trochee contest

sleeprhyme

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Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:56:00 PM

Jack, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2015 11:47:00 AM

Love the humour, Jack! Anyway, could easily have been a pet dog. Congrats on your lovely win. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2015 9:02:00 AM

!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2015 6:45:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/2/2015 3:04:00 AM

LOL, congrats Jack.

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2015 12:44:00 AM

JACK:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2015 12:43:00 AM

hahaha. I should have known this was you, Jack. You are a GAS!!! Congrats in my contest. (you sure it's not based on your nasty Ex?)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/21/2015 6:31:00 PM

He he he . Love the humor. love phyl

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/13/2015 3:18:00 PM

Particularly nasty aspects to this visitation Jack, I don't envy you at all..'

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/4/2015 9:06:00 AM

Happy Easter mate.

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/1/2015 8:32:00 PM

Sleeping single in a double bed, nough said. :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/30/2015 12:41:00 PM

lol jack brought a smile thank you pal

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2015 1:46:00 PM

Good that it is pure fiction..Got a chuckle..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara(Type the characters you see in the box is 666)..