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Nightmare Poetry

it was yesterday. four o'clock in the morning and I woke up. was convulsing with words. still lying and though scared I thought how beautiful they would be all those words together. but when i got up later they were all gone. at that time they seemed to make sense. poetic sense. but they are already gone. maybe they appeared to drown some nightmare. a bad dream in which the choked words screamed: look at us here, struggling to make us poetry.

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Date: 4/22/2022 12:01:00 PM
Weird dream last night with a poem fully written on a page. I looked at it, tried to remember it, knowing I was dreaming and would forget when I awoke, I even took a picture of it with my phone in my dream, but of course it was gone when I awoke! You’re not alone!
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Marco Chies
Date: 4/22/2022 1:19:00 PM
Well, my dream or nightmare was very similar to yours, I remember thinking about photographing the words, but I must have fallen asleep and voilá... everything is gone...
Date: 4/21/2022 9:05:00 PM
Marco, I have experienced this so many times over the years. Words so vivid in my mind vanish like cotton candy while I admire how wonderful they taste. I will sometimes roll over and jot them into my phone, but not always and those are lost. You are exhibiting the symptoms of a creative mind! Write on, my friend!
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Marco Chies
Date: 4/23/2022 3:21:00 PM
Thank you for your always sincere and appropriate words, Milton!

Book: Shattered Sighs