Nightmare of a Beautiful Dream

I dreamt my mother mourned a broken doll,
porcelain, sad brown eyes, and five feet tall.

Entombed it in the finest place she could,
a cottage encircled by sunlit wood.

She danced a silent waltz with it, keening,
encouraging life in the wretched thing.

And it mended as she was worn away.
She did not hear when warned of her decay.

I was left a pristine porcelain doll,
and a broken mother in its enthrall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Brittany. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Very interesting winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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November 23, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Brittany, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD
Ober Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 6:50 AM
This is an incredible write. I got goosebumps while reading it. A fave!
Guzzi Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 6:02 AM
More congratulations Brittany,well deserved too xx
Roberts Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Great poem Brittany, congrats ...Seren
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November 23, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congrats Brittany on your 4th place win I my Deep Dream contest.. bravo!! hugs Michael
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November 13, 2012 at 3:07 AM
Powerful write, Brittany...dreams are a fascinating phenomenon, aren't they?...If this is for the contest it reads like a sure winner - Tim
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