Constance La France Poet Verse

Nightmare

Naive, I just wander-
      nameless voices  c a l l i n g,
  Nebulous vague faces,
         need  c r y i n g  out for me . . . 
Necropolis of TOMBS-
     netherworld abyss  . . .  pearl
            necklace ripped from my neck.

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April 29, 2017
Pleiades/Nightmare
Copyright Protected, ID 896456


Pleiades N
Kim Merryman

First Place

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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer May 13, 2017 at 3:32 PM Amazing creativity from such as small prompt!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2017 at 12:32 PM - On top of the list - Congratulations on your great winner poem, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels May 13, 2017 at 2:20 AM Love the sense of dread you've masterfully weaved into this fantastic Nonet. "Nebulous vague faces" is an awesome line. Congratulations on your First Place win. Regards, John.

Laura Leiser May 12, 2017 at 11:14 PM Wow! Stunning use of vocabulary for your most excellent Pleiades poem, Constance! Congrats on your top win. :)

Dean Wood May 12, 2017 at 10:29 PM Extremely well done Wings! A well deserved win. A 7 from me.

Sushma A. Singh May 12, 2017 at 9:02 PM Congrats on top win!

Jeremy Smith May 12, 2017 at 8:49 PM Congratulations, on your big win today!!

Joseph May May 12, 2017 at 7:34 PM Congrats on your top win BW

Agnes Krampe May 12, 2017 at 5:35 PM Congrats on your win, Constance. I love what you did with your pleiades.

Kim Merryman May 12, 2017 at 5:16 PM An excellent artistic way of portraying a nightmare, Constance! Love the visual language. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Pin Dew April 30, 2017 at 5:05 PM Haunting, original, brilliant! Pin Dew May 2, 2017 at 8:46 AM I would gladly take my time reading all your works. :) Constance La France May 1, 2017 at 2:59 PM Pin thanks for visiting my poem and for the brilliant

James Inman April 30, 2017 at 7:24 AM I don't remember my dreams much anymore but I do still have the occasional night terror. A darkly foreboding write. Constance La France May 1, 2017 at 3:04 PM James thanks for visiting my poem . I dream in color and go to some dark places

Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 6:22 PM Awesome write, Constance, totally a winner.... ~* Constance La France May 1, 2017 at 3:11 PM Eve thanks for visiting my poem and for the awesome