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Nightingale's Soul Lights

NIGHTINGALE'S SOUL LIGHTS Plain spotless uniform so pure and white Modest neat gear rendering tender loving fight Day, night 'till wee hours, eyes a must wide awake Extending a hand, shaking off all aches Tiptoeing like a sly in and out of rooms Dim ~ quiet same as white garden tombs Grace under pressure upon first newborn's cry Wiping tears from a gentle old man's dying eye Evenings so dark and mornings so bright Everyday a nurse sees life kaleidoscope lights Despite some voice rudeness to foul remarks Kindness,her soul's sweet perfume, larks A nurse appears unfeeling firm when mankind bleeds Within her are hidden soft golden beauty deeds (c) 11:47pm July 06, 2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations on this poem. Wonderfully written.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/4/2014 12:37:00 PM

Awe, Olive, thank you for the reply...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 10:53:00 PM

I like your winning poem Olive... Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:42:00 AM

thanks LOllie Linda.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/3/2014 6:22:00 PM

Back again Olive_eloi with resounding congratulations on your top podium finish! Well done! We'll met for a cake and coffee at the Champs-Elysees:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:41:00 AM

Thanks much PAul. :) imw aiting for the treat.. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/3/2014 5:18:00 PM

A tender touching write, you must look like an angel Olive with the white light shining from you, I am favouriting this my mum was a nurse:-) fabulous win. Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/3/2014 8:02:00 AM

An incredible write. Congratulations on your first place win. I am so happy for you. All My Love.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 10:39:00 AM

Thanks much MAurice.. :) I appreciate this God bless you.. :)

Mike Bayles

Date: 7/9/2014 10:02:00 AM

This poem gives a nice tribute to nurses. They have touched many of our lives. Well done.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 4:06:00 AM

Thank you Mike..:) GBU

David Brown

Date: 7/7/2014 6:13:00 PM

Wonderful homage to such a worthy profession - loved this piece. Captures so elegantly the devotion behind the work they do. Thanks for sharing, David Btw, I wrote one for a nurse/ dear friend called 'Opening hearts'.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 8:55:00 AM

thank you so much David I appreciate your remark but well this also goes to each persons who loves their work :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/7/2014 3:52:00 PM

This is a sweet tribute to Olive_eloi and all the other nurses who perform their work with dedication. Very well constructed sonnet. gl in contest. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 8:58:00 AM

Thanks you Paul for dropping by.. :D i learned allot from being a nurse.. :D

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/6/2014 7:00:00 PM

This is a lovely poem of the compassion of a human being. Very well done, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 8:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Faye.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2014 6:13:00 PM

Beautiful...you shed much light on the life of a nurse...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2014 6:40:00 PM

Thank you Tim :) well, anyone must see that behind such uniform is one heartful noble job :)