-nighthawk:

The nighthawk that's afraid of the dark
Stays up to protect his heart 
With a mind wired by the creative 
That won’t cease until he finishes his piece 
He draws to put himself at ease 
To give himself peace 

Every night well past twelve 
Putting his head through hell 
Before he rests it on his pillow 
Which he clutches as he is hopeless and hollow

The painting of agony is what brought him peace and calm
The same painting that brought his peace near
Was the catalyst to his nightmare 
Through the night tantalized by fear 
Vexing and nagging his ear 
The dark’s cold leer 
Haunts him still 

Till he wakes 
In his ashes
And asks

Why
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Mitra Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 6:24 PM
The first two lines say a lot and I just loved it....Congrats on your win Ethan :))
Axe Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thanks :)
Sambourne Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 4:05 PM
The images here of a nighthawk artist struggling with what he loves, struggling with the night are remarkable. The ending of your piece is like an arrow. It strikes. Well done. Sincerely, Brian
Axe Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thank You :)
Puddifoot Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 3:18 PM
what an intriguing poem, i read it several times..good use of internal and end rhyme and wordplay..congrats on your win in my contest!
Axe Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Thanks :)
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