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Nightfall's Reign

Silhouetted mist, Crowning the rustic surface: Halo of darkness.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/6/2009 12:54:00 PM

crowning the warm core a rough surface,as nightfall reigns in a Halo of darkness---i love this one--excellent --Charma

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 9/5/2009 2:07:00 AM

Very well done....I can feel night just falling....The Southern Belle

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2009 4:17:00 PM

Raul, your work just keeps climbing another notch higher than the previous month, to read your Haiku's makes me so glad i clicked on the Soups link that April night>>ty>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/4/2009 1:44:00 PM

I can sense the dampness, and feel the coolness.... nice one! ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2009 1:37:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. Sara

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/4/2009 1:05:00 PM

" Halo of darkness"..... Awesome word play Raul.......:JP]

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2009 1:03:00 PM

Thanks for the comment Raul on Dodge ball the form requires rhyme internal & external I believe and satire...I don't think I did use alliteration..must check again! I really like the multiple images of Royalty ..Reign, Crown, Halo as well as the double entendre of rain & reign and the personification too!!! Light & Love oh talented one!

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/4/2009 12:40:00 PM

WOW I say i'd give a 10 if possible! ~$avannah~