Nightfall Harp

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This is my greatest poem I have created, yet.

It is now dark and under the dome
there are hands moving
inside a home

Notes of angelic sound
circulate the air
wandering beyond walls
flying into the city
making countless calls

Creators of footsteps below the full pearl
tread in the alleys
hearing musical melodies shout out for them to hark
their hearts dance to the hymn
coinciding to the tempo in the dark

Where is that rhythm coming from
There are no signs of the source that show their thumb
Stare at the moon, the nightfall harp is blessing the sadsome

Out there, a hundred miles far
the souls pick up their ear
from the bliss dispersing from afar

Nightfall harp,
where are you
Nightfall harp,
we hear you,
Nightfall harp,
we love you

Happiness shall now come to pass
as the angel sprouts his wings

Hand in hand
the city joins for a holy choir
as their voices wire
blazing spirit fire
showing love a step higher

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/30/2017 10:59:00 AM
very nice, Vermillion, beautiful write. Hugs eve
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Date: 12/30/2017 3:58:00 AM
An awesome poem Vermillion. I'm stil dazed and I wonder if I can write as beautifully. Oh this thought is sadsome.
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:07:00 PM
Yes.It is a Heavenly Night. Good Example. Enjoyed. Love
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:55:00 AM
wonderful poem, Vermillion, Hugs eve
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Date: 12/7/2017 8:53:00 PM
Lovely poem, Vermilion, I like the nightfall harp, so evocative
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Date: 12/7/2017 1:44:00 AM
The poem is awesome wonder if we could match your caliber!
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Date: 12/3/2017 5:33:00 PM
This is a lovely example for your contest. I especially liked how you rhymed from, thumb and that new word,sadsome. That was pretty cool!
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Date: 12/3/2017 10:40:00 AM
Vermillion, a great poem and a wonderful example for your contest, I will try my best to write you a beauty !
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