Nightfall

days final moment
ocean swallows up the sun
      departing sunset
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gorelick Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Like the picture you painted. NOthing like sunset at the beach. BG
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 12:55 PM
-Beautiful image in your haiku, Christian. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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