Nightfall

Winter flapping much the whole night
The foggy breeze wandered very tight
Mundane body wished the honey warm
But no rose napped in the blanket farm

She came with the pretty nuptial harness 
Swinging the waist, stirring the girdle mass
Full of glittering bangle with luscious lips
Lac dyed ankle and whispered eye peeps

Adjacent lie down, sharing the pillow silently
Excited hard breathing disheveled impulsively
Amber eyes to dyed toes were all attached
Close, too close go round the hearts in merged

Lonely darkness escaped by the chirping light 
Dawn’s eyes feel a fragile body’s ecstatic fight 


©Mahtab Bangalee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 2/3/2025 11:05:00 PM
You link nature and experiences very well!
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 2/9/2025 8:00:00 PM
Thanks dear Poet for your kind words and time
Date: 1/30/2025 9:37:00 AM
Flapping winters and whispering peepers always intrigue me. Bang a gong Bangalee
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 2/1/2025 8:15:00 PM
Thanks, dear Poet
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