Nightfall

Soft lights blink underneath shaded starry sky swift glowing firefly quietly passes by Birds chirps sweet lullaby, sway to world of dreams.

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/17/2011 11:12:00 AM

A wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/29/2009 7:14:00 AM

What a wonderfully delighted find this is, a brilliant write full of music, tranquil and sweet.

Adell Foster

Date: 12/17/2008 1:30:00 PM

This is a very lovely Laturne write and a true pleasure to have read. I thank you for sharing. Congratulations and Good Luck in the next round. God Bless, Always, Adell

John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 3:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 9:25:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Sue Mason

Date: 11/1/2008 4:10:00 PM

This is very beautiful and a great use of the form. Congratulations on being a "first round survivor" in the PoetrySoup contest! I look forward to reading more of your write, Sunjhinee. Best days to you!

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/1/2008 4:04:00 PM

Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

P Sheart

Date: 10/27/2008 2:59:00 PM

Welcome to PS. smile. Congatulations on having your wonder poem make the semi-finals and good luck in the finals! Love Light Truth Patricia

Ginger Marie

Date: 10/27/2008 1:29:00 PM

It's short, yet it describes a complete image. That's a wonderful poem, congratulations on making it through the first round!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/27/2008 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol