Nightfall

Soft
lights blink
underneath
shaded starry 
sky

swift
glowing
firefly
quietly passes
by

Birds
chirps sweet
lullaby,
sway to world of
dreams.

imaginationnatureseasonsLullabylanterne

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Caryl Muzzey

February 17, 2011 at 11:12 AM

A wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

L'Nass Shango

May 29, 2009 at 7:14 AM

What a wonderfully delighted find this is, a brilliant write full of music, tranquil and sweet.

Adell Foster

December 17, 2008 at 1:30 PM

This is a very lovely Laturne write and a true pleasure to have read. I thank you for sharing. Congratulations and Good Luck in the next round. God Bless, Always, Adell

John Heck

November 30, 2008 at 3:44 AM

Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

November 11, 2008 at 9:25 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Sue Mason

November 1, 2008 at 4:10 PM

This is very beautiful and a great use of the form. Congratulations on being a "first round survivor" in the PoetrySoup contest! I look forward to reading more of your write, Sunjhinee. Best days to you!