Marty Owens Poet Haiku

Night Vision Needed

Free Verse:

Springtime eternal in the forest.
Slick moss invades the massive rock hillside!
Night will soon bring creatures.
  
Haiku:

Springtime eternal
Slick moss invades massive rocks
Night soon brings creatures.


Note:  Changed the Name of this poem from Slick and Slide to Night Vision Needed because I 
was inspired by Barbara Gorelick's comment.  Thanks Barbara
And also because someone told me that a poems name was very important.  Slick and Slide 
didn't do it justice.   Thanks Raul.

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Debbie Guzzi October 7, 2009 at 4:56 PM I like them both! Light & Love

Raul Moreno October 6, 2009 at 3:10 PM The haiku part is nice Marty, love the closing line...Raul

Barbara Gorelick October 1, 2009 at 8:40 PM soup mail..BG

Kate W October 1, 2009 at 7:40 PM always remember it grows on the north side so dont get lost nice write.....................kate

James Marshall Goff September 29, 2009 at 8:42 PM love the movement of the moss as night descends! Martin!.... jim

Carol Sunshine Brown September 29, 2009 at 10:17 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us Martin. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick September 29, 2009 at 8:06 AM This is not in the traditional haiku form..but it certainly is beautiful. Wish I had night vision to see those night creatures. Well done. BG