Night Vision Needed
Free Verse:
Springtime eternal in the forest.
Slick moss invades the massive rock hillside!
Night will soon bring creatures.
Haiku:
Springtime eternal
Slick moss invades massive rocks
Night soon brings creatures.
Note: Changed the Name of this poem from Slick and Slide to Night Vision Needed because I
was inspired by Barbara Gorelick's comment. Thanks Barbara
And also because someone told me that a poems name was very important. Slick and Slide
didn't do it justice. Thanks Raul.
Copyright © Marty Owens | Year Posted 2009
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