Night Vision
In my dream I see my brother
canoeing down the rapids
the moon behind him
blazing a trail
his heart beating
to the rhythm of drums
and the roar of bubbling waters
native blood runs through his veins
AP: 2nd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2026
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