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Night Vision

In my dream I see my brother
canoeing down the rapids
the moon behind him
blazing a trail
his heart beating
to the rhythm of drums
and the roar of bubbling waters
native blood runs through his veins



AP: 2nd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 4:45 PM
what a beautiful 'vision'
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 2:19 PM
Nice visual
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:41 PM
Thanks, Kim. I enjoyed this art prompt ~
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