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We were naked, we twisted our bodies into unfinished puzzle and we shared wild dreams. We talked and we used twisted words. Did we show real face, did we do, just enough? ............................................... We knew thirst, we pledged broken promises and I saw broken skin. I kissed sacred scars and I made you smile. Was dead midnight and we did the liar's prayer. ....................................................... Kelli, skin so smoothe, so sweet. You wanted the moon and I wanted your kiss. You were wild fire and I was quiet lake. In dreams, our loved lived and I remember the most beautiful girl, I ever knew.

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Date: 10/30/2020 6:37:00 AM
Sounds very passionate... Was she the one that got away?
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John Castellenas
Date: 10/31/2020 2:12:00 AM
Yes she did. Some woman are runners and some may stay. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Date: 10/6/2020 2:35:00 PM
I really like the way you present these Prose poems, John. I look forward to reading more! ~Angie
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John Castellenas
Date: 10/8/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you dear Angela. I appreciate the comment.

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