Night Time Gown

Jet black satin gown 
with tiny crystals sewn upon. 
Silver disk at her waist. 
It's length trails out eternal. 
The night dresses well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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James Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 2:41 PM
More like this please! Very well done. Provokes thought. Gareth
Haick Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Oh, wow, Paula! This definitely goes to my fav. because you have painted night so elegantly!!! ....Silver disk at her waist!!! wow! True poet that you are!! Peace, love, friend! Audrey
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