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Night Swans

upon a black pond the chatter of stars flashing the outer banks the arrows of mars keep silent 'til morning when stars search for sleep then scatter the sky with a white veil of peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/13/2019 4:46:00 PM
I LIKE! CayCay
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Date: 4/5/2019 8:45:00 PM
Hello Anthony Slausin, I like this poem.As i read this poem, I pictured the two swans together. Well done, have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/5/2019 8:14:00 PM
Anthony, I am not a Haiku fan, however, this one is exceptionally lovely.. Very cool!! Panagiota
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Date: 4/5/2019 3:25:00 PM
Very pretty...I like. BG
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