Night Snow

night snow
  moccasin silent 
drifts downward
  landing without feet...
smiles in the sunlight
  ~ morning curtains peek
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 8:58 PM
love the moccasin silent, great imagery in this verse, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Thanks for the love on this one, Eve. Have a wonderful rest of the weekend! Happiness, Gershon
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February 15, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Gershon, Your poem 'night snow' might've slipped by just as silent. There's magic in the many facets of a gem. And this is one of them. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Such an encouraging comment must have come from my friend,, Richard/Raven. Thank you so much for the support. Peace and Joy, Gershon
Knowlton Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 9:55 AM
I could truly feel the softness Gershon. I love short poems and this one`s a beauty.
Wolf Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Hey, thanks for the positive vibes, Charlie! Appreciated. Best of everything, Gershon
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January 22, 2020 at 4:52 PM
I have one word for this...fav!
Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 8:46 PM
I have three words for my reply: Thank you!... BELATEDLY! :) Gershon
Romios Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Hi Gershon This is great.perfection in each line. A FAV! Hope you don't mind?)) Panagiota xx Moccasin silent.......awesome
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Thanks so much for the fave and the awesome comment! Warm wishes, Panagiota! :) Gershon
Adams Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 11:08 AM
this is gorgeous in both choice words and imagery... exquisite my friend... hugs
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Thanks for the ringing endorsement there! Smiles, Gershon
Sands Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 8:39 AM
I love this. It is so nice. A Fav. Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, for the FAVE. Always appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon
Neumann Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 3:57 AM
Wonderful. Moccasin silent. The ancestors call. Kind wishes, Kai
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January 22, 2020 at 12:51 AM
There is such a delicate feel to this exquisite poem, my friend.
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:07 PM
Thanks for the praise, Caren. Smiles, Gershon
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January 22, 2020 at 12:44 AM
lol.. beautiful imagery.. There morning show started after the night snow.. Here, no night snow.. Only morning show..
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Morning show's better without that night snow, methinks! Enjoy the show today and every day, Jenish! Cheers, Gershon
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Loved the “moccasin silent”. Good work my friend...
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 12:59 PM
How those Native Americans wore/wear moccasins in winter I'll never figure out... Thanks for letting me know what works in the poem for you. Best wishes, Charlie! ~ Gershon
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