Night Sky

The dazzling milky way is such a boon
 Cool breeze sings lullaby in silent night,
 Glittering skies with waxing crescent moon,
 Dim moon light provokes the stars, shine vibrant.

 Cluster of planets fascinate the eyes
 The Jupiter comes first at dusk ,twinkles;
 Picturesque red eye,named Mars,adorns skies;
 Other little gems join them,stars sprinkle.

 Dwarf planet Pluto shines like a crystal,
 Bright evening star Venus is a highlight.
 It's fun to envisage shapes and symbols
I used to draw,ships,huts,fishes,and kites

Rivalry between meteors and planes
It's obscure and confuses tiny brains

May-3-2017
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Callus Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Beautiful imagery turns your night sky into a gem, Supraja! In my case, watching the stars without burdening my mind with names and distinctions is ample satisfaction for me! #7 Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Well done Supraja, best wishes in the contest...
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Nice job with this challenge. It's a difficult one in my opinion and I hope I can find time for it. Good luck in the contest, Supraja.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 3:55 PM
I love the personality you give to each of the planets with your stunning imagery Supraja. I hope to see this on the winner's list! 7 : )
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Your poem captures the charm of nature in its purity as part of this beautiful universe. A good interpretation of the wonders space provides, leaving a calm tranquil feel to your poem, that's pristine in content and intent. Emile.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 2:47 AM
A dazzling lecture in cosmology dear, Supraja! Excellent work my friend. Have a look at my today's Monoku: Becomingand Being if you have time! A 7+
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