Jannie Breedt Poet Free verse

Night Sky

Behold, a crack in the sky...
Its a star ! And then it multiplies...
A thousand million
 silver twinkling confetti...
Galactical milk in celestial ballet
Your white bedazzle takes the breath away
Soapsudded moon and underwater candellabra
In an ocean of quiet delivery
Oozes a rhapsody, nay a symphony!
Gliding on golden orbital slide
A bridal comet gown on fluted notes
MAGNIFICAT! MAGNIFICAT! MAGNIFICAT!

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Jannie Breedt September 26, 2017 at 11:40 AM Well thats just plain wonderful . Im thrilled thank you

Patricia Cresswell September 26, 2017 at 11:35 AM I came to read again. Its beauty like the firmament will never fade.

Patricia Cresswell September 1, 2017 at 7:33 AM I am floating in a pool surrounded by your sky; comets come close to view this strange creature then depart quickly on business in the universe. I remain mesmer's daughter captured. Treasure box. Jannie Breedt September 4, 2017 at 11:22 PM That ,in itself is the makings of a great poem. Its time to renew my PS subscription. Over this past year I have found the dearest friends here and I cou t you among them. Su h a fine lady.Patricia, Thank you for ALL your input in my work.

Pandita Sietesantos January 22, 2017 at 5:54 PM Hi Jannie, I love viewing the night sky and you have reflected its great beauty with the amazing imagery you projected in this awesome piece! Bravo and a 7! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Best wishes. Pandita Jannie Breedt September 4, 2017 at 11:19 PM Oh Pandita( what a beautiful name), Alas I only found your wonderfully gracious comment now. I do not understand how it almost went by me. Thank you so much. I value your visit and will soon reciprocate

Phil Capitano December 29, 2016 at 7:00 AM Wonderful description of the night sky and I like the way the tempo picked up as you went along. Jannie Breedt December 29, 2016 at 7:12 AM Hi Phil gratitude here. Real nice to have your visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong December 28, 2016 at 3:08 AM Wow Janie...this is one of your best and most beautiful. The imagery in this piece is awesome! A fave for me! ; ) 7 Jannie Breedt December 28, 2016 at 6:35 AM Wow Connie. That sure is a nice comment. Here in the bushveld we can see better. Folks in the city miss out on night skies.