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One fine span on earth One glorious span in space Both God's Handiwork Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved) Honorable Mention in Familiarity Unknown Contest

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Date: 4/23/2010 5:09:00 PM
hmmm freeze a moment in time....and then contrast it to somethinghappening inthat same moment..tied to it some how but very different? line 1 setting..line 2 & 3 action...Light & Love
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:36:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your HM in Gareth's contest... an amazing write and honor for u to now enjoy my dear friend.. your portfolio is growing nicely...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:56:00 AM
Excellent description of the photo. Congratulations on your success in the contest, Bob! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2010 10:33:00 AM
This is swell one like the haiku on Gods creation. P.d.
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Date: 4/14/2010 4:56:00 PM
Good luck, Bob.
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:02:00 PM
Hey Robert, Thnx for reading my piece and leaving your kind comments for me...means a whole lot...Jimmy
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:03:00 PM
A fine haiku with fine images. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:13:00 PM
Robert~ very nice I like your inspirational touch to this Haiku! Good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 2:00:00 PM
very nice and good luck in the contest well done faleshia
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:18:00 PM
Great insight in the picture...Should be in the winner's circle...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing ...Sara
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:13:00 PM
Excellent Haiku Bob and good luck in Gareth'sw contest.. a perfect description of the lovely photo... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:03:00 PM
Great entry. Good luck to you. Joyce
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