Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Haiku

Night Sky

One fine span on earth

     One glorious span in space

          Both God's Handiwork

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Honorable Mention in Familiarity Unknown Contest

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Debbie Guzzi April 23, 2010 at 5:09 PM hmmm freeze a moment in time....and then contrast it to somethinghappening inthat same moment..tied to it some how but very different? line 1 setting..line 2 & 3 action...Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 18, 2010 at 8:36 AM Congrats Bob on your HM in Gareth's contest... an amazing write and honor for u to now enjoy my dear friend.. your portfolio is growing nicely...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire April 18, 2010 at 5:56 AM Excellent description of the photo. Congratulations on your success in the contest, Bob! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A April 17, 2010 at 10:33 AM This is swell one like the haiku on Gods creation. P.d.

Ralph Taylor April 14, 2010 at 4:56 PM Good luck, Bob.

Jimmy Anderson April 12, 2010 at 3:02 PM Hey Robert, Thnx for reading my piece and leaving your kind comments for me...means a whole lot...Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta April 11, 2010 at 9:03 PM A fine haiku with fine images. Good luck in the contest

Laura Mckenzie April 11, 2010 at 7:13 PM Robert~ very nice I like your inspirational touch to this Haiku! Good luck in the contest! Laura :)

Faleshia Murphy April 11, 2010 at 2:00 PM very nice and good luck in the contest well done faleshia

Sara Kendrick April 11, 2010 at 1:18 PM Great insight in the picture...Should be in the winner's circle...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing ...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 11, 2010 at 1:13 PM Excellent Haiku Bob and good luck in Gareth'sw contest.. a perfect description of the lovely photo... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Joyce Johnson April 11, 2010 at 1:03 PM Great entry. Good luck to you. Joyce