Night Sea Lullaby

blanketed by night
sky a carousal of stars . . .
being rocked by sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 8:18 PM
Lovely haiku on a starlit night sleeping caressed by the lullaby of waves.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 12:50 AM
Beautiful little gem of sweetness Andrea <3
Hind Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:07 PM
lovely imagery!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:55 PM
Ahhh!! I like this one which is a contest entry and which reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Sorry that you got a n/a, Andrea. I like it anyway. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:49 PM
It already got NA. But thanks
Kerr Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 8:24 AM
Magnificent is the word that springs to mind, Andrea, when reading this Haiku. Awesome imagery in a word portrait. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Thanks so much
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 7:30 AM
How beautiful is this…brings to mind a sea horse. Here is a link to the painting I own…changes too as you dim the light. In the room the grandchildren would use. Would ask which horse do you want to ride. I guess I was hoping for Mary Poppins Dreams. ;) https://www.leroyneiman.com/product/carousel/
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Thanks so much. I wrote this for Brian's contest and got NA. I wonder if Line would like it in her contests for little poems
Rolland Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 1:55 AM
great haiku, rocking is a cute word, enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:08 PM
Thanks, Yann
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