Kim Rodrigues Poet Senryu

Night Raven

I lie awake; I have become
like a bird alone on a roof.
                              Psalm 102:7 Bible NIV

NIGHT RAVEN

squawks; silence deaf’ning
the sphere sleeps as he fears - blinding
rain rivets tin roof

7/12/2020

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Demetrios Trifiatis July 13, 2020 at 6:59 AM Mesmerizing Senryu dearest, Kim!

Caren Krutsinger July 13, 2020 at 3:12 AM Gorgeous imagery, Kim. I hope all is well in your circle of the world. Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2020 at 5:57 AM Pretty good! And you too. Thanks!

Imran Islam July 12, 2020 at 7:34 PM Beautiful imagery, Kim. Stay safe! Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:28 PM Thank you, Lure!

Eve Roper July 12, 2020 at 5:01 PM Great imagery in this verse, Kim. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:29 PM Thank you, Eve!

Sand Blown July 12, 2020 at 2:47 PM ...nice one...good title....'night- raven's night rave'n'.......stan sand Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:29 PM Thank you, Sand!

Silent One July 12, 2020 at 2:19 PM A very good senryu.. Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:29 PM Thank you, Silent!

Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 12:40 PM Kim, this is darkly beautiful _Constance Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:30 PM Thank you, Constance!

Panagiota Romios July 12, 2020 at 12:15 PM Great imagery.... PR Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:30 PM Thank you, Panagiota!