Night Owl

From Embalmed darkness She toll Her rhythmic dirge Night's serene silent Is gently Deflowered Written by Joseph Osita For Dr Ram's septolet contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/21/2011 9:40:00 AM

Very interesting thoughts here, Joseph :) Congrats on your win :D

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Joseph. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/20/2011 7:21:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 8:52:00 PM

lovely septolet, joseph...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Elaine George

Date: 7/19/2011 8:12:00 PM

Lovely Septolet, Joseph. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 7:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Joseph.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/19/2011 4:22:00 PM

great word choice - deflowered, dirge...congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 3:51:00 PM

Congrats Joseph on your fantastic win luv with this dynamic delight in the contest.. great one luv..enjoy...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 3:27:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 2:52:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/18/2011 5:50:00 PM

Thanks for the entry to the contest, Joseph

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 7/18/2011 11:05:00 AM

Beautifully written!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 10:34:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration Joseph. Love, Carol