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Night Out at the Carnival


Neon lights twinkle against the velvet, dark skies,
Ferris wheel spins like a huge ring of fireflies;
Shadows sway in the pavement, tents, booths, and crowds, 
As bright bulbs bring glare to cotton candy clouds .

Iron tunes from colorful carousel
Equalize clanking ride near the dinging bell;
Laughter listens to chatter screams in delight,
As hush whispers before the ride drops from height.

Sweet smell of chocolate, popcorn, and browned dough
Blends with oil from ride's engine in hot wind's blow;
Jumbo burger melts on the tongue bathed by Coke,
While the air is mixed with words of grease and smoke.

Young ones in a dreamlike world within nighttide
Savor the spot where pain pauses and woes hide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/16/2025 5:38:00 PM
Superb sonnet; delightful.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 8/17/2025 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, Sir Robert. Your comment means a lot to me. Best regards~BFA
Date: 7/29/2025 1:53:00 AM
Very nicely crafted, Bernard. :) john
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 8/12/2025 5:35:00 PM
Thanks ,Sir John. I appreciate your kind comment. Best regards~BFA
Date: 7/28/2025 4:31:00 PM
a well constructed sonnet, perfect for the contest. As I read your poem I felt as if I was actually at a carnival. Well done & best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 8/12/2025 5:36:00 PM
Much thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. Such an encouraging comment. Love~BFA

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