Night of the Storm

Questionable beliefs
Turn into mishandled futures
Long time age; being a child
One that danced, twirled, and sang
Played when the sun was up
Slept as it fell down deep
Bring up the stars who lift a room
So forever it was thought
There twinkling they would remain
But just as the storm
Steals away the sun during light
Studying the plight of rain clouds
As they march strong and unnerved 
Raucous are the sound of thunder
Ghostly is the lighting streaks
In the morning its not so ending
Watching good to bad
I'll always remember how fine 
The moments were before
But bad to worse it is at night
Now the memory of the stars are 
They didn't have that much
To illuminate now they are completely wiped
As I live older to see 
The night storm that changed me
It was in that hour
I see, so many unpleasant things
Could always be worser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 8:51 AM
This is such a deep powerful write! Well done! Pandita
Solomon Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 1:27 PM
thank you so much for reading my poem I appreciate greatly your comment.
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