Night of the Moth

Its fluttering wings as it flits round the lamp
That glows in the street that is misty and damp
Clack like a skeletal vampire in flight
And cast evil shadows like bats in the night

Tonight in the alleyways, flea ridden rats
Reach an accord with the street dogs and cats
To prowl with joint purpose this All Hallows’ eve
And follow the scent of the breath people breathe

But only when slicing the jugular vein
Do they find the humans are manic again
The rats lose their heads to a single quick bite
And street dogs and feral cats whimper in fright

And this night a full moon brings other surprises
No creature is safe from what Satan devises
The bat that thought moths could negate hunger pangs
Was wrong because moths aren’t supposed to have fangs

And so on the ground beneath that ailing lamp
The moth flails its victims, it’s fangs red and damp
And there, where they crash down, with thud after thud
A fast growing pile of bats drained of blood

The moth seeks a new lamp; a new hunting ground
Those bloodless bats rise up and stumble around
But somewhere a clock strikes a new midnight hour
And demons give way to a more saintly power
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bauer Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 2:16 PM
you sure know how to tell a story, terry! i enjoyed this one very much and liked the unexpectedness of moths with fangs...
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Thanks, Ilene. My scary head seems to have grafted well this year. Glad you enjoyed. Fangs again. Terry
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 9:36 PM
Moths around the street lamps at night. How do they survive colliding with each other and the lamp. Rats you can have them. Happy Halloween. Blessings friend
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:05 AM
Thanks, Eve. We’ve had a mini glut of hawk-moths in the UK this year, some of them seemed as big as bats. Happy Halloween to you too… (although I’m not quite done with it yet). Terry
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 6:30 PM
Great plotline for 'Vampire of the Night,' an all-night program that runs in Chicago every night. The host reports on fresh shootings every time a new one hits the City Desk --- you know, about 3-4 times an hour or so. lol. Wear-Wolf
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:01 AM
I thought you’d come up with your own clothing brand, and Wear-Wolf was an instruction. ;-) Terry
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October 23, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Wow, is this ever blood-thirsty, Terry. Nothing worse I can think of than a "fast growing pile of bats drained of blood." Happy Halloween!
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Thanks, Milt. I felt a bit sorry for those unfortunate bats, so I decided to make them undead. It took a lot of googling to confirm that the ghouls and demons call it a day at midnight, but I got there in the end. Terry
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