Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Night of Memories

I always felt safe while
tangled in sheets till dawn
as I'd looked at your smile,
draperies tightly drawn.

Idyllic reveries
of fragmentary memories
painfully pierce my soul through;
melting away without you.



4/5/2019

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6.  Night of Memories

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Sara Kendrick April 25, 2019 at 6:38 AM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Anisha Dutta April 22, 2019 at 11:34 AM BIG CONGRATS to win top. Regards n love

Constance La France April 22, 2019 at 10:54 AM Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece that speaks of great love ~

Ann Gilmour April 22, 2019 at 2:34 AM Such sadness and love so beautifully expressed Eve with many congrats on your 1st place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 22, 2019 at 2:19 AM Congratulations, Eve on your great win.

Connie Marcum Wong April 21, 2019 at 6:43 PM Beautiful Eve. Congratulations on your top win! xxoo Happy Easter!

John Gondolf April 21, 2019 at 5:03 PM A beautifully written sad poem, Eve, congrats on your win. John

Ravi Sathasivam April 10, 2019 at 6:17 AM Excellent but sad. Enjoyed reading it.

Nette Onclaud April 9, 2019 at 1:37 PM grandeur of love never forgotten... eve, this is a soulful, heartfelt sigh!....huggs

Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2019 at 6:38 PM Sad and oh so beautiful. Hugs Rick.

Jennifer Proxenos April 7, 2019 at 1:01 PM If this is true, what a beautiful tribute to this person. Imaginative and creative as well as emotive! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 6, 2019 at 11:02 PM Ah! Lost love wonderfully put

Mystic Rose Rose April 6, 2019 at 5:03 AM Nothing more lingering then these kind of memories, I love the imagery you paint, have a blessed day dear friend . Love you xo

Tom Cunningham April 6, 2019 at 2:27 AM But memories are precious and we cherish them, a verse from the heart Eve. Good luck. Tom.

Caren Krutsinger April 6, 2019 at 12:08 AM I was going to say poignant, but Line did. I still want to add it, so I shall. Poignant, and heartfelt, a terrific poem, Eve.

Line Gauthier April 5, 2019 at 11:02 PM A beautiful poignant write, Eve. Love it. Eve Roper April 5, 2019 at 11:37 PM Thank you, Line.