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Night of Memories

I always felt safe while tangled in sheets till dawn as I'd looked at your smile, draperies tightly drawn. Idyllic reveries of fragmentary memories painfully pierce my soul through; melting away without you. 4/5/2019 Poetry Contest :Writing Challenge 1- April, 2019 - Its All About 8 - Sponsored by: Dear Heart abab ccdd 6. Night of Memories

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Date: 4/25/2019 6:38:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/22/2019 11:34:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Regards n love
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Date: 4/22/2019 10:54:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece that speaks of great love ~
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Date: 4/22/2019 2:34:00 AM
Such sadness and love so beautifully expressed Eve with many congrats on your 1st place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 4/22/2019 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your great win.
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Date: 4/21/2019 6:43:00 PM
Beautiful Eve. Congratulations on your top win! xxoo Happy Easter!
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Date: 4/21/2019 5:03:00 PM
A beautifully written sad poem, Eve, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 4/10/2019 6:17:00 AM
Excellent but sad. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 4/9/2019 1:37:00 PM
grandeur of love never forgotten... eve, this is a soulful, heartfelt sigh!....huggs
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Date: 4/8/2019 6:38:00 PM
Sad and oh so beautiful. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/7/2019 1:01:00 PM
If this is true, what a beautiful tribute to this person. Imaginative and creative as well as emotive! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/6/2019 11:02:00 PM
Ah! Lost love wonderfully put
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Date: 4/6/2019 5:03:00 AM
Nothing more lingering then these kind of memories, I love the imagery you paint, have a blessed day dear friend . Love you xo
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Date: 4/6/2019 2:27:00 AM
But memories are precious and we cherish them, a verse from the heart Eve. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 4/6/2019 12:08:00 AM
I was going to say poignant, but Line did. I still want to add it, so I shall. Poignant, and heartfelt, a terrific poem, Eve.
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Date: 4/5/2019 11:02:00 PM
A beautiful poignant write, Eve. Love it.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2019 11:37:00 PM
Thank you, Line.

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