Night of Infamy

The lightning, it was over bright

Arthritic trees, stripped bare of leaves,

seemed skeletal, inflicting fright

The lightning, it was over bright

as if the devil's acolyte 

The world shall beg for mercy, please!

The lightning, it was over bright


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6/17/16
For Contest: First Line Prompt - 2
Sponsor: Julia Ward
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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Great description, Carrie!
Delaney Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Ooh! I like the description,'arthritic trees,' Good direction with the line and the form you chose is perfect. SuZ
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June 17, 2016 at 10:00 PM
I felt terror, a world gone strong, after finding light. Carrie... One of the best poems I've read tonight. Skat
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