Night of Bliss

Cool breeze whistles along
birds gather at sea shore
this coming rain is sure
a night of bliss

As I await my date
in the twilight of love
looking at stars above
hope reassured

then comes the pretty dame
my heart beats just begun
blood pressure is no fun
trial of love..


*Abhange Form-has four lines with syllable counts of 6,6,6,4 with lines 2 and 3 rhyming.Inspired by Nette Onclaud...
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Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:57 AM
Nice one, congrats Olusegun ...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:28 PM
such beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 1, 2015 at 6:55 PM
OLUSEGUN, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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