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Night of Bliss

Cool breeze whistles along birds gather at sea shore this coming rain is sure a night of bliss As I await my date in the twilight of love looking at stars above hope reassured then comes the pretty dame my heart beats just begun blood pressure is no fun trial of love.. *Abhange Form-has four lines with syllable counts of 6,6,6,4 with lines 2 and 3 rhyming.Inspired by Nette Onclaud...

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Date: 1/2/2015 3:57:00 AM
Nice one, congrats Olusegun ...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:28:00 PM
such beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2015 6:55:00 PM
OLUSEGUN, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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