Night of a Thousand Tears

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Another lost love song, fictional of course!

Night of a thousand tears

Another day breaks,
and I'm still here
I was kind of hoping,
I would just disappear

Since you left,
I want to, sleep my life away
but I haven't slept now,
for twenty days

I should try to work, because,
my rents, in arrears
I'm what you might call,
a guy in between careers

Bridge 1
When you we're here,
we had lot's of dreams,
but for you,
they were nightmares
at least to me,
that's how it seems

Chorus
Just another night,
of a thousand tears,
days turn to weeks,
and weeks to years
but, I'll polish our memories
like prized souvenirs,
it's, just another night,
of a thousand tears

I wake up ready,
to make the best of the day
I cook up our breakfast
in the usual way

The coffees all ready,
brewed nicely for two
Your mugs still on the shelf,
now what do I do?

Days turn to weeks,
in the blink of an eye,
I'm getting older,
and I don't even try

My life had a purpose,
when you were here
and just like a fool,
I'll wait for you to appear

Chorus
Just another night,
of a thousand tears,
days turn to weeks,
and weeks to years
but, I'll polish our memories
like prized souvenirs,
it's, just another night,
of a thousand tears

Bridge 2
I just can't get used to
being on my own
I'm not the kind of person
who likes to be alone
My heart feels like it's been pierced, 
by a thousand spears, 
it's, just another night of a thousand tears.


It's just another night of a thousand tears
It's just another night of a thousand tears

repeat and fade to zero

John Derek Hamilton
July 8,2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/10/2017 9:05:00 AM
Sad, absolutely sad, John, the saddest part is to know that for many this is true:( I love this lyric:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/10/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Jo, I like this one too, I like the cadence and the rhyme especially, it felt good as it flowed, always look forward to your visits!
Date: 7/9/2017 8:50:00 AM
I'll join you with those tears...after we have a couple of beers lol...great lyric my friend...long time no chat...got to change that lol...hope all is good John...all the best...^WW^
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Date: 7/9/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thanks WW appreciate the thumbs up on the lyric, I do appreciate the visit and comment! Take care!
Date: 7/8/2017 7:11:00 PM
Sounds like a good country cry in your beer song, John. A real catchy chorus!!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/8/2017 7:27:00 PM
That's exactly what I pictured, great minds you know!Thanks Danny brave first comment!
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/8/2017 7:27:00 PM
Actually there is a country song there's a tear in my beer lol!!
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