Night Mist

In that moment
when evening mist
hung close
like your breath 
warm upon my cheek,
and the brush of your lips
made me quiver
like the night chill,
I knew, 
and my heart sang
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 18, 2015 at 8:29 PM
reminds me of alot of old school women poets of japan. short, poignant sketches of how their love moves them. could just as well have been written by one of them in their pagoda hundreds of years ago.
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