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Night Mist

In that moment when evening mist hung close like your breath warm upon my cheek, and the brush of your lips made me quiver like the night chill, I knew, and my heart sang

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/18/2015 8:29:00 PM
reminds me of alot of old school women poets of japan. short, poignant sketches of how their love moves them. could just as well have been written by one of them in their pagoda hundreds of years ago.
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