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Night Meets the River

Night Meets the River The deep night sky meets the river With stars sparkling in ripples below The water moves with a quiver To a kiss around the bend, it flows Meandering glimmer of hope shines through Peaceful sounds reach the quiet land With soft music in the air, playing too Where water and rays merge into a band The moonlight fills the sky above Spreading light through the forest trees Shining on two gentle hearts in love As apprehension quickly flees Moving with currents, love lifts to the sky This mellow night slowly does ignite A lovely passion with a sweet sigh Engraving a memory, with a beautiful sight Heidi Sands 1/4/18

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Date: 1/21/2018 6:13:00 PM
Heidi, I can just picture this scene as I am reding this poem. Good luck in the contest. havea nice evening my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2018 6:19:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :) nice to see your visit .
Date: 1/18/2018 8:04:00 PM
This lovely poem glides along as smoothly as your little river, Heidi...enchanting. My very best wishes. :) john
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2018 8:05:00 PM
Thank you John :)
Date: 1/18/2018 6:55:00 AM
A passion filled write Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you James :)
Date: 1/16/2018 10:08:00 AM
Lovely rhyme and amazing imagery Heidi, loved every word!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thank you John! I am happy you like it :)
Date: 1/6/2018 5:50:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem a lot Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2018 5:51:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this Gary, thank you :)
Date: 1/5/2018 2:32:00 PM
Just lovely, Heidi. I can perfectly picture it. Good Luck xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 1/5/2018 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful lines and beautiful imagery Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/5/2018 4:41:00 AM
A beautiful romantic poem, Heidi, best of luck. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thank you John :) Happy New Year !
Date: 1/4/2018 1:57:00 PM
Such lilting imagery this romantic poem be, Heidi. It moves gracefully like a swan swimming on a serene pond. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Freddie! I appreciate your feedback :)
Date: 1/4/2018 11:22:00 AM
Lovely imagery of the night, sky, and the river..a romantic combination shining in moonlight..a beautiful poem..a winning poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! :)
Date: 1/4/2018 11:15:00 AM
Simply beautiful Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Tim :)
Date: 1/4/2018 11:02:00 AM
Beautifully penned Heidi, I enjoyed the read...GL in the contest..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)

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