Night Maps

in daylight’s grace, a casteless sphere revolves
           poignant maps emerge at night
              the wealthy shine like stars

kimo (10-7-6) syllables

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Sara Kendrick

September 14, 2021 at 1:01 PM

Wanted to say congrats on this winning work. Yes, the poor have to work and there isn't any extra to go out at night and shine like stars with diamond glitter. Sara

Constance La France

September 8, 2021 at 9:12 PM

David, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

September 7, 2021 at 3:17 PM

Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

September 7, 2021 at 4:37 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2021 at 8:12 AM

Absolutely gorgeous. One of my favorites on the winner list!

Jan Allison

September 5, 2021 at 3:52 PM

Its great to be able to drop by again and say many congrats on your win David:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

January 3, 2015 at 3:28 PM

I am sorry to be repetitive in my comment. Pretty well we are all saying the same thing David. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

January 3, 2015 at 9:00 AM

wonderful imagery many congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

January 3, 2015 at 8:49 AM

Congrats on your big win David,have a lovely Weekend...huggs

Poet Destroyer A

January 2, 2015 at 10:20 PM

David, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*