Night Lights


                    twilight spectacle

           pageant of twinkling lanterns ~

                     flittering fireflies










                       May 23, 2019
          Writing Challenge 3, May 2019
                 Haiku Poetry Contest
                 Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Romios Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Majestically peaceful Panagiota
Awtry Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 11:47 PM
What a beautiful comment. Thank you so much. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 2:48 PM
Hello P.S. Awtry, night lights are beautiful sjining at night. Have a nice day my friend.
Awtry Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 5:19 PM
thank you Darlene! Hope you are having a good day today. It is a little cold and rainy today here, but I love rain! :)
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:33 PM
P.S., I am enchanted by the beautiful and magical imagery of your awesome haiku. A poetic gem extolling one of Nature’s wonders. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Awtry Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Thank you Susan! You have made my day with your kind and encouraging words :)
Romios Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Beautiful Haiku.enchantingl Reminds me of being 12' in my parents backyard in Elmwood Park, Illinois Panagiota
Awtry Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 5:16 PM
fireflies certainly bring back happy childhood memories for me as well. Thank you for your kind words :) ~ps
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Quite a beautiful and tranquil Haiku.
Awtry Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Thank you :) ~ps
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Wonderful imagery P.S.
Awtry Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Thank you :). -ps
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Beautiful image , P.S., congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Awtry Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Eve :). -ps
La France Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:44 AM
PS congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!
Awtry Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Thank you Dear Heart :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 3:00 PM
I love these bugs a lot. I wrote my Lanterne on them. Way to go in the contest, P.S.
Awtry Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Thank you Andrea! They are a seemingly magical part of this time of year :)
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 1:54 PM
- A beautiful sight, P.S. ... light that dances in the dark :) -   Congratulations with a great 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Awtry Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Mcguire Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 12:13 AM
This poem gave a me some light! I enjoyed!
Awtry Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Timothy. :) -ps
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Spectacular ku! A winner for me :) Good luck! xomo
Awtry Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 9:15 PM
Thank you Maureen! :)
Wolf Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Nicely depicted. Love watching those lanterns flitter, myself G.L. in the contest! :) gw
Awtry Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 7:49 PM
Thank you :). -ps
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