Night Lady

Stars magic mist that surrounds the night lady
A lady of shape body with grace flowing into a field of dark
Lit by the tiny whimsical dust that helps carry her form
Solid is she the night lady that is covered in a veil of starlight
Comforting sight to see her lonely walk away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:29 PM
HI Kristina it is a beautiful tribute to Stars of night,....i love your idea and way of writing
Lamoureux Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Beautiful!
Whitmore Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thanks :-)
Duet Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Lovely imagery in this one too, Kristina.
Whitmore Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Carole! :-)
Callus Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Visually beautiful, Kristina! Night and the stars are indeed magical and captivating. Regards // paul
Whitmore Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you for your comment Paul! The evening time is inspirational for many senses. :-)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:52 PM
I agree totally w/SO ... this is exceptional poetry, Kristina. Such a sensual, ethereal quality to this marvelous poem ... solid is she the night lady that is covered in a veil of starlight. Pure poetry this be. Love and peace always.
Whitmore Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 11:35 AM
A more short poem than I typically write. I am so glad it has those lines that impact the image that inspired this from twitter @realisticpoetry It was a beautiful photo and I enjoyed the opportunity to participate in a group prompt. Thanks for your comment Freddie! Always love reading them!
One Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Now this is amazing imagery... Nice use of words.. Great vocabulary..
Whitmore Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Thanks! I am glad you stop by to take the time to read some of my new writings. :-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace