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Night Green

night green in my Rembrandt pencil box is green shade sharpened it is a pointed pencil presence part of a pointillism part of the paper part of the picture night green in my Rembrandt pencil box is green shade not a light green not a leaf green not a yellow green and not too blue night green in my Rembrandt pencil box is green shade the unknown in every mark such as the shadows cast upon and around as the unconscious past lives within the dialogue of life and is only sometimes noticed but the light not so bright without green shade

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Silent One

Date: 2/23/2018 3:42:00 PM

You write so well, this is briiliant . Love how you use poetic techniques..

Susan Baquie
Date: 2/24/2018 2:07:00 AM

Thank you - I only write occasionally so it's good to have positive responses.

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/21/2018 6:15:00 AM

hi susan , i like the unqiue style of writing....you have written great thing but as you said that as the unconscious past lives within the dialogue of life and is only sometimes noticed so it is unnoticed............you are a deep thinker

Susan Baquie
Date: 2/24/2018 2:04:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poetry. I will be reading more of yours shortly, they hold much feeling and evocation.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/11/2016 9:29:00 AM

I am shocked that this deep write has so few comments. Sometimes it takes years of chiseling to create a great sculpture, only to find that its greatness will be appreciated long after we expire. I rate this as a solid 10!!

Susan Baquie
Date: 12/12/2016 1:27:00 AM

wow - I am so very pleased and surprised that you appreciate this one - thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2016 10:45:00 AM

Susan, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Susan Baquie
Date: 10/28/2016 5:55:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome and also for your advice - very kind of you. I haven't written for quite some time and am hoping that joining in will move me to start again. I am feeling the possibility