Alana Tye Poet Rhyme

Night Goddess

As the sun sets behind the trees
and shadows fall across the land
She wakes from a day of slumber
and stretches out her hand
Her voice, soft as the sea
creates a magic in the air
This Night Goddess brings to life
a world of fantasy rare
With a warm, gentle touch
a weed becomes a rose
A sweet fragrance follows
everywhere she goes
She dances in the moonlight
with her hair hanging down
Swaying from side to side
in her long, flowing gown
The stones that guide her path
disappear into forest deep
Beware enchantment of her song
for your soul she'll surely keep

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 2, 2012 at 7:15 AM I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Alana. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Joanna Smith February 22, 2010 at 12:01 PM wow alana this is another great one here i loved it very unique topic and your imagery is magnificent i plan on following you now so watch out this is great!=)Jo

The Melody Sings February 22, 2010 at 10:59 AM Wow. you never cease to amaze me! Beautiful, wonderful, enchanting!

Jay Loveless February 22, 2010 at 10:35 AM She guides you in the dark, from paths wary you must, and shows you the light that glow within the forests warm trust, a dancing goddess at best, from maiden to mother to crone, and guides you on your lifes path, till found at summerlands home...again, another beautiful piece of art.

Inkstain Thepoet November 13, 2009 at 10:54 PM That was a very nice fantasy write. It sounds like you were in an enchanted mindstate when you wrote this one. Whether you were or weren't, this was a good one. Loved it!!

Woodrow Lucas November 15, 2008 at 3:22 PM The night goddess can have my soul anytime. Great Write!! My favorite line=a weed becomes a rose!! Great imagery!! Wood

Joseph Spence Sr September 3, 2008 at 3:48 PM This is an excellent piece. The rhyming pattern gives it a special spark. The message is lovely and paints a vivid picture. Great job! ~Joseph

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 6, 2008 at 5:42 PM OooooooooH!! Think I'll stay up all night and keep an eye out. Great write. Vince

Elaine George August 2, 2008 at 10:16 PM Beautiful, Alana lainie

Kelly Waugh-Moore July 27, 2008 at 9:01 PM I really like this poem...you done a great job. It is very enchanting. This is from Kel (WanderingSpirit) on here. I found out how to enter some of my poetry.

Heidie Buys July 24, 2008 at 3:44 PM You paint a mesmerizing picture, very well written and totally captivating. Well done. Love Heidie

Sharon Winter July 24, 2008 at 5:44 AM Wonderful to read you again Alana. A most enchanting write, like a child's fairy tale. Bewitching and magical in my mind. Beautiful imagery with perfect rhyme and flow. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt July 24, 2008 at 4:44 AM She sounds like a goddess alright! What a terrific rhyme scheme and flow to this as this goddess takes form and comes to life. She takes souls too? A wonderful write. Michael