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Night Goddess

As the sun sets behind the trees and shadows fall across the land She wakes from a day of slumber and stretches out her hand Her voice, soft as the sea creates a magic in the air This Night Goddess brings to life a world of fantasy rare With a warm, gentle touch a weed becomes a rose A sweet fragrance follows everywhere she goes She dances in the moonlight with her hair hanging down Swaying from side to side in her long, flowing gown The stones that guide her path disappear into forest deep Beware enchantment of her song for your soul she'll surely keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 2/2/2012 7:15:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Alana. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2010 12:01:00 PM
wow alana this is another great one here i loved it very unique topic and your imagery is magnificent i plan on following you now so watch out this is great!=)Jo
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:59:00 AM
Wow. you never cease to amaze me! Beautiful, wonderful, enchanting!
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:35:00 AM
She guides you in the dark, from paths wary you must, and shows you the light that glow within the forests warm trust, a dancing goddess at best, from maiden to mother to crone, and guides you on your lifes path, till found at summerlands home...again, another beautiful piece of art.
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Date: 11/13/2009 10:54:00 PM
That was a very nice fantasy write. It sounds like you were in an enchanted mindstate when you wrote this one. Whether you were or weren't, this was a good one. Loved it!!
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Date: 11/15/2008 3:22:00 PM
The night goddess can have my soul anytime. Great Write!! My favorite line=a weed becomes a rose!! Great imagery!! Wood
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Date: 9/3/2008 3:48:00 PM
This is an excellent piece. The rhyming pattern gives it a special spark. The message is lovely and paints a vivid picture. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/6/2008 5:42:00 PM
OooooooooH!! Think I'll stay up all night and keep an eye out. Great write. Vince
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Date: 8/2/2008 10:16:00 PM
Beautiful, Alana lainie
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Date: 7/27/2008 9:01:00 PM
I really like this done a great job. It is very enchanting. This is from Kel (WanderingSpirit) on here. I found out how to enter some of my poetry.
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Date: 7/24/2008 3:44:00 PM
You paint a mesmerizing picture, very well written and totally captivating. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/24/2008 5:44:00 AM
Wonderful to read you again Alana. A most enchanting write, like a child's fairy tale. Bewitching and magical in my mind. Beautiful imagery with perfect rhyme and flow. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/24/2008 4:44:00 AM
She sounds like a goddess alright! What a terrific rhyme scheme and flow to this as this goddess takes form and comes to life. She takes souls too? A wonderful write. Michael
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