Night Garden

thunder and lightning
with heavy rainfall at night - -
snails and slugs party


for Regina Riddle's nature haiku contest
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Babcock Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 1:46 PM
And what a party they did have. Hope all is well with you Jack. Cute haiku. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 8:09 PM
this is so cute, jack, how are you doing. Did I miss a recent email from you?
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Those snails and slugs like it wet and damp and leave those disgusting trails don't they. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 6:49 PM
I just adore that final line Jack - a little humour is what is needed my friend and you delivered:-) hugs Jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Yes, after a heavy rain, the snails and slugs come out in droves; great haiku for the contest-
Callus Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 3:14 PM
I like these delightful lines, Jack! While we huddle in bed those gastropods party and make a mess of our garden! Best regards // paul
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