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Night Garden

thunder and lightning with heavy rainfall at night - - snails and slugs party for Regina Riddle's nature haiku contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/31/2020 1:46:00 PM

And what a party they did have. Hope all is well with you Jack. Cute haiku. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:09:00 PM

this is so cute, jack, how are you doing. Did I miss a recent email from you?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2020 8:49:00 AM

Those snails and slugs like it wet and damp and leave those disgusting trails don't they. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2020 6:49:00 PM

I just adore that final line Jack - a little humour is what is needed my friend and you delivered:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/21/2020 4:10:00 PM

Yes, after a heavy rain, the snails and slugs come out in droves; great haiku for the contest-

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2020 3:14:00 PM

I like these delightful lines, Jack! While we huddle in bed those gastropods party and make a mess of our garden! Best regards // paul