Night Frights

Dish water film screen rolls over the eyes
Holding ones breath til the pain subsides
Sensory processing put to the test. 
Praying for sleep or at least for some rest. 

A sharp pain forged from a fire deep inside
Throbbing and stabbing on nerve ends it rides. 
Feel sick to the stomach, can't catch a breath
Skin feels on fire, yet it's soaked with sweat. 

Hail Mary, our father pray for relief
Wait for the light of the morning to peep. 
Somehow there's hope in the light of the day
Removed from the realm where night terrors play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 11, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Hi Joe, glad you enjoyed being featured this past week... Linda
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April 10, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Very good rhyming pattern Joe. A joy to read a good piece of work that is clear and concise and also rhymes well.
Murphy Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Thank you so much. This is a rather dark piece and I was not sure how it would be accepted.
A   Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 4:00 PM
JOE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Murphy Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Thank you very much. It was an honor to be featured.
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