Night Falls

Night falls and I'm at ease
soon you'll be my waited dream
on painted wings you'll flitter by
reaching points that catch my eye
enter recesses   my very soul
fillings voids  in time worn holes
wonders seized in tender touch
caressing calm in natures blush
on silver streaks of amber light
filter  hints of gloried sight
upon tepid breezes heading south
graze your lips upon my mouth

Shared thoughts surrender in silken beds
Hearts rejoice in shades of red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:21 AM
tender and tactile... what a splendid write, tim.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:02 AM
- So lovely, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - # 7
Vaso Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Does she have a sister? :) Beautiful as always!
Nance Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Had a mezmerizing flow to it, a nice lil' lullaby
Turner Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Sweet dream, Tim. I really like how you used the soft rhymes, nice touch!
Lane Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 2:40 PM
I don't know which lines I like best but together they are reason to sing of love. Well done, Tim, on creating a very sensual recurring dream.
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 2:04 PM
what a wonderful sultry dream - bet you wouldn't want to wake up from this one Tim:-) hugs jan xx7
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