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Night Falls

Night falls and I'm at ease soon you'll be my waited dream on painted wings you'll flitter by reaching points that catch my eye enter recesses my very soul fillings voids in time worn holes wonders seized in tender touch caressing calm in natures blush on silver streaks of amber light filter hints of gloried sight upon tepid breezes heading south graze your lips upon my mouth Shared thoughts surrender in silken beds Hearts rejoice in shades of red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/22/2016 8:21:00 AM
tender and tactile... what a splendid write, tim.. huggs
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:02:00 AM
- So lovely, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - # 7
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Date: 9/21/2016 11:16:00 PM
Does she have a sister? :) Beautiful as always!
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:07:00 PM
Had a mezmerizing flow to it, a nice lil' lullaby
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:38:00 PM
Sweet dream, Tim. I really like how you used the soft rhymes, nice touch!
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:40:00 PM
I don't know which lines I like best but together they are reason to sing of love. Well done, Tim, on creating a very sensual recurring dream.
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:04:00 PM
what a wonderful sultry dream - bet you wouldn't want to wake up from this one Tim:-) hugs jan xx7
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