Night Falls

Red sunset dips
night's curtain drapes the bay
lovers embrace



for Charles Henderson's haiku competition
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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your win Deirdre in Charles's contest "Haiku Your Way". Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Calhoun Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Hi Deirdre - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the haiku contest. Best wishes, KC
Henderson Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 8:44 PM
your quite welcome. Is a fine haiku. My new contest is up.
Poet Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 5:29 PM
This one is awesome! Congratulations Deirdre on your well deserved win .This Haiku should have been placed among the top three(my opinion)--kashinath
Freeman Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations Deirdre, on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:41 PM
This was one of my absolute favs. Did I fav it? If not, here goes!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Congrats Deirdre on your winning poem in the Haiku your way contest with this brilliant write .. enjoy with luv..
K. Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Congrats Deirdre-- you sure painted a very romantic image here, love that first line :)
Richards Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Lovely, .......just lovely....well done, Deirdre! Congratulations on your win!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:05 PM
wow, I really like this romantic one. A highest rating!
Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Nice pen picture of the lovers sanctuary with lovely images, deirdre
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