Night During Halloween

Lights emanating
from the grim candelabras.
Specters are coming..
is it just a phantasm?
No, 'tis but some foliage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 20, 2008 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Love, Shar
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October 18, 2008 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations of your win in Kristin's contest! Nicely done! Peace always, John
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October 13, 2008 at 9:28 AM
Awesome write here, Hal. Congratulations on your win in the contest and I hope to read lots more of your writing!!
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October 12, 2008 at 2:23 PM
I like the interesting way you approached the subject. The last line was a surprise--a pleasant one too. Congratulations on having your poem chosen as one of the winners in Kristin's contest! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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October 12, 2008 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations Hal on your win in Kristin's contest! Great job! Love, Shar
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September 19, 2008 at 1:37 PM
Had to chuckle at the last line. Nice use of this short format. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy sharing your poetry and getting to know others in our writing community. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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