Night Dreams

The bright blue diamond eyes shone
 Around the heart, gold, he spun
 A image from the distant place
 Where sun and moon exist
Only amongst the stars you find
A species of a different kind

Once thought to be alone
He somehow found a new home
A image from the distant place
where sun and moon exist
He appeared inside the dream
Not what was expected so it seems.

He was the vision inside my head
Came to me every night in my bed
A image from the distant place
where sun and moon exist
A place where dream unfold
With many stories to be told.



24/9/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Uche O. Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Milky way to be precise, that's the dream of every godly writer, that colourful place........ Thanks for sharing.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 6:46 AM
very visionary....I like it. How are you and your sweet grand baby?
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:58 PM
hey, this says free verse, but there seems to be some kind of unique pattern to it where you are switching lines in the stanzas. It's very interesting how you did that. Great effect. for the dream contest??
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 3:28 PM
What we don't dream? aye? Hope you're well and happy! Light & Love
Poet Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 12:37 PM
A dreamy poem Phyllis!Enjoyed the read.
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Should sometimes wish that good dreams could come true.- Beautiful poem Phyllis. - Have a nice afternoon. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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September 24, 2012 at 10:13 AM
Dear Phyllis, i love the way you describe the perfect world in a dream... always~ pd
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