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Why work is exhausting even when it involves no physical labor | Vox

Night Caves In




The night caves in I am as tired as original sin 
its a no win situation for I'm tired from within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/21/2025 2:01:00 PM
I wish I could get a deep sleep...sighhh! 4 or 5 hours broken sleep is the best I can muster. Mind you...it has its compensations. Well put, Rose. :) john
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Date: 8/20/2025 10:16:00 PM
It's true, Vie. Like a baby that gets fussy when they stay up to long, we tend to fight a losing battle when going to bed when we are exhausted. We doing enter into the deep sleep that heals and helps us. Be careful, losing the battle inside can lead to a downward spiral and depression, my friend. Powerful two line you share with us today. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 8/21/2025 11:01:00 AM
I agree with you Bill, the battle inside needs to be nurtured if we are going to win the game in the end. Thanks for leaving a comment :)
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