Night Breeze Carves Calm Waters - Hiku 12 -

Written: May 31st, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand

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silver    r~i~p~p~l~e~s   tell 
                                              their    tale ~

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                       d     hums     a*l*o*n*g
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Jones Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 2:31 PM
Congratulations on your imaginative write winning Sotto!
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 2:18 AM
Creative lines. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Hind Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Quite the lovely poem, Sotto!
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 12:44 PM
- Creative and great hiku, Las:) - Good luck :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 11:11 AM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... Have a fun weekend writing away..........
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 9:29 AM
Very cool, Sotto
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